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Clear Language and Design Guide

 

Welcome to the St. Christopher House Adult Literacy Program's Clear Language and Design Guide. This was written by Bill Pusztai with the help of other people who were staff members at the time. It is used to train new tutors, and handed out to anyone who wants to know more about writing clearly. Its most important use is for people learning to tutor adult literacy learners, but it can be used to make any writing clearer and easier to understand.

getting started emphasis simple words
typeface use of upper & lower case line length
colour pictures editing
justification punctuation testing
spacing abbreviations  



Getting started


The goal of Clear Language and Design is to produce text that communicates clearly and easily. There are two main areas to consider: the design or look of the text, and the actual language itself. Clear language is something you can practise as you speak - it means saying what you mean as clearly and simply as you can. Clear design is something you can practise when you look at signs, brochures, advertising, anything written or printed. Look and listen critically: was it said as simply as it could be? What made it hard to understand?


The first step in writing is to decide who will be reading what you write. Who you write for will influence every decision you make about style and layout. What may be fine for an advanced reader may completely block a beginning reader, whether that be vocabulary or type style. For instance, very basic readers will need a lot of white space, but more advanced readers can handle more densely packed text.


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Use a clear typeface.


Typeface is the style of lettering. Some examples are shown below. Here are some things to look for when choosing a typeface:

  • letters should be of "regular" proportion, not extended or condensed

Examples of condensed and extended fonts

  • there should be no "mirror" shapes: the letters q and p, or d and b are not mirror images of each other

Examples of mirror and non-mirror images

  • there are serifs to help (serifs are the little "hooks" on the ends of letters)

Examples of Serifs

  • the lines that make up the letters get thicker and thinner

Example changing thickness

  • the letters are not distorted, simplified, or ornamented with distracting lines

Example of ornate letters

Times New Roman is the easiest typeface to read, according to scientists; however, there is some evidence that Verdana is the easiest to read on a computer screen.  This is there is a lot of space between the letters.  


Here are some typefaces to compare. Of these, Times Roman is probably the easiest and Scott the hardest to read.

Examples of different fonts

Another aspect of typeface to consider is size.   The size of letters is measured in a unit called "points". The bigger the point size, the bigger the letter. For literacy work try to use 16 point or bigger, especially with very basic readers.

Various Type Sizes

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Use dark print on a light background.


Black print on white paper is best. On computer screens, sometimes white letters on black can also work well. For posters, when you might want to use coloured paper to draw attention, sit back about six feet from your finished poster and make sure the text still stands out from the background. Text should not be on top of (superimposed on) pictures, "grey scale" (dotted) background or textured backgrounds.

Example of background and font colour

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Use Left Justification

Start lines against the left margin and let the right hand side "run ragged", that is, let the right edge of the text be an uneven edge. Center (each line centered), right (even edge on the right), or full justification (both left and right sides made even by padding with spaces) is harder for most people to read.


Left justification



Centre justification



Right Justification

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Leave lots of open space.


Leaving lots of space works two ways. First, it makes it easier to see each word on the page. Second, it makes it seem there is less to read. A page darkly covered in closely packed small type is unfriendly to the most skilled reader!

You can add space by

  • changing line spacing, using one-and-a-half line spacing (or more)
  • moving the top, bottom, left and right margins closer together
  • adding spaces between paragraphs
  • turning the page on its side, so that the longest edge of the paper runs left to right instead of up and down ("landscape orientation")

You should not try to change the "kerning", which is the space between letters. Changing kerning alters the way letters in words fit together, which can make recognition harder.


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Use Bold or Larger Type to Emphasize


Important ideas should stand out. You can use colour sometimes. Usually bold type is the easiest way to emphasize. Sometimes you can underline - but watch out, if the underlining is too close to the bottom of the letters, that can be confusing for new readers. It makes the letters seem to run together.

Emphasis

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Use upper case and lower case normally.


English uses upper case (capital, majuscules) to mark the beginning of a sentence and to mark proper nouns (names). Upper and lower case are important cues when reading - using all caps short-circuits these cues.

Mixed-case words keep their distinctive shapes, while the all-upper-case words all look more or less rectangular.


Word Shapes

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 Use pictures


Pictures suggest the subject of the text. Skilled readers pick up clues from the whole context, not just the text. Using pictures as clues is not cheating and makes the page look a lot more interesting! Line drawings are the best for most documents - they're simple and clear, and they photocopy well.

Picture of Heart

Happy Valentine's Day

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Use punctuation normally


Period, comma, exclamation mark and question mark are basic to written English. Try to use them in a simple way. Avoid using periods for ellipsis (that's when people use "..." or ".." to mean "I left something out here" or to show a hesitation when someone's speaking). More complicated punctuation, like

  • brackets () and braces {}
  • colon : and semicolon ;
  • quotation marks " " and back-tick `
  • slashes / | and dashes -
  • asterisk *, at sign @, ampersand &, number #

should be used with care - some readers have no trouble with them at all, some ignore them completely, others get confused by them.


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 Use whole words

Write out abbreviations eg, ie = for example, like, like when

  • etc = etcetera
  • no. = number
  • Apt, St, Ave, Blvd, and so on

There are exceptions to this rule. If the abbreviation is better known than the full word (e.g. fax)


Write out the meaning of acronyms in full at least the first time. Some readers prefer to have periods between each letter of the acronym, other prefer not to.

  • Literacy Working Committee: LWC or L.W.C.
  • Metro Toronto Movement for Literacy: MTML
  • St. Christopher House Adult Literacy Program: SCHALP

You may also want to avoid isn't, they're, it's, haven't, won't, can't and other contractions, especially with new readers.


You can also use the "short names" for places that have long titles, like "St Chris" instead of "St Christopher House". It's your call which is going to make most sense to your readers.


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 Use the simplest words you can


Sometimes you can replace complicated words with several simpler words, or add a short explanation. It may not mean exactly the same thing, but sometimes a simpler word close to your meaning is better than a complicated word that may stop your reader.
  • "therefore" = "and so"
  • "all residents in this locality" = "everyone who lives here"
  • "some assembly may be required" = "you have to put it together"
  • "self-propelled vehicle of husbandry" = "tractor"
 
Sometimes you just have to go with an obscure word! This is especially true when there is technical vocabulary to cover - say, kitchen words, road signs, or the names of car parts.
 
Use as few proper nouns (the names of places and people) as you can. These are often the most difficult words in a piece of text, since they may be non-English, archaic English, or unfamiliar to many readers.
 
Use simple or active verbs. They feel more immediate. For instance, you could replace
  • "it was felt by all of us" with "we all felt"
  • "we had gone" with "we went"
  • "I will have bought" with "I will buy"
and so on. You could also consider changing the point of view.
Instead talking about things in the third person (she, it, he, they, them, "one", "people", "society"), talk about them in the first person (me, I, we, us).  Instead of "It is felt that" you can say "I feel".  Instead of "Our society tends to", you can say "We tend to".

Do include phrases that crop up in your readers' everyday speech, like "dollars a pound", "time of day", "and so on". It helps a person guess what the next word will be.


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Keep each line short


Ideally you want each line to express one complete thought. For a very basic reader, each line should complete one grammatical object.
 
Break lines carefully. I break lines differently depending on the reader's level. Good places to break lines are
 
  • at a breath pause
  • a comma
  • the end of a sentence
  • the end of a quote
  • the end of a list
  • the end of a phrase
  • around a conjunction (and, but, or - they show that there is more coming)
  • after a difficult word.
 
For instance, in the St Chris book Dirt Workers
 
Farm workers like these Jamaicans
 
help to grow and pick apples,
 
cucumbers, corn, beans, tomatoes
 
and other fruits and vegetables.
 
Sometimes they are called
 
"dirt workers"
 
because they work on the land.
 
 
Andrew and his friends are from
 
Barbados.
 
They come to Canada every year
 
to work on the farms.
 
They all live together in one room
 
and work seven days a week
 
and sometimes all night.

Edit and re-edit


Ideally, allow a couple of days between when you first write something and when you sit down to edit it. In a perfect world, put it away and edit it again a week or more later. Usually you can't do that, so there are a few tricks you can use:

  1. Look at each word, and read the text without it. If the text still means the same thing without the word, delete it.
  2. Ask someone else to read it aloud, or onto a tape. Listen for unnecessary words.
  3. Count the average number of words in a sentence. If it's very high, look for places where you can break up long sentences. This document averages about 10 word per sentence. Some word processors will also tell you the grade level of your document, or find the average word length. These can also be useful measurements.

Use fewer modifiers and descriptive words.


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Field Test 


The ultimate test of any piece of writing is to  give it to lots of people to read! Note what slows them down. Ask them how to improve it. Suggest alternatives, see what they think.
 
If you want to be systematic about your testing, make sure you have lots of diversity among your readers. Ask yourself:
  • Have I asked people of all ages?
  • Have I asked people of many different backgrounds?
  • Have I asked men and women?
  • Have I asked people who read easily and also people who are just starting to read?

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